Allan Mclead
Thursday, December 22, 2011
Rate this verse, please?
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Pretty dope. Id give it an 8. My only suggestion would b, next time, put ur lines in order so the ends of the lines rhyme. Its easier to read & see how its supposed to flow. Hope i helped PEACE
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